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Strangers In Visions

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Strangers in visions of wilderness
Held captive in a lover's eyes
Who stole in the whisper of promises
The key to the other one's mind?

On treks in another kinds notion
Subservient and lacking in wile
The soldiers move forward in motions
Betraying a lyrical style

In pastures the flowers are grazing
An ever-field locked into time
In memory of what they are tasting
The stars in the night shall align

For beauty is what we are grasping
Released in an ethereal smile
We hear not the pitch that is sharpening
The edges we needed to file

A journey, on such, you are taken
Of values and fears left behind
Who stole in the whisper of promises
The key to the other one's mind?
Old poem - like 20 years old.  This is an example of my 'free flow' poetry, that I did a lot of when younger.  It didn't make any sense to me, but it didn't matter.  I find these kinds of poems quite meditative now.
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WhitePlumFragrance's avatar
This poem is like wine, it ages well. :)